Jamie's English Journal

This essay has some real strengths. You have explored a range of emotions of the female characters – and you have used an extensive range of quotations to support your points and you have explored the characters and poet’s voice from a range of perspectives.

To develop your work, you will want to:

1. Organise your paragraphs more carefully where you deal with one idea per paragraph
2. When you use quotations, ensure you have a specific purpose for each one. Also explain the language features you might find in these quotations
3. Identify the features that both texts might have in common, or that might contrast.